MY BETS FRIEND
Three years ago i came to this school. I didn’t know anyone that I
didn’t want to come here. The first week I also was very quiet and shy but one
day a nice girl and I started talking and we became very good friend. Her name
was Helana.
In these moment Helena is one of my best friends. She’s very pretty,tall
and slim ,she has got beautiful and green eyes like me, she is blond and has
straight hair and very long. She has a very cool style clothing. She’s very
original because she always wears different clothes; but she usually wears
jeans , large sweatshirt and a cool shoes. She is popular at school. She is
also very polite and cheerful, because she never is sad she always smiles a
lot, this is one of thing I like about she. She’s very students, is a little
impatient and always tells the truth too.
She loves to dance; she goes to danse conservatory like me every day and
also she dances in a contemporary company, she’s very busy, however she takes
time for everything. She also likes to all sports because she’s very energetic.
All in all, I think that Helena is a good person. She always helps me
and she always has a smile for me, for
this things is my best friend.
Hi Anabel !!! your text is really nice ,but I found some silly mistakes . For example in the title you should change the order of the letters in the word best . I think dance conservatory is written this way not danse conservatory .
ReplyDeleteAnabel is very nice, thank you;) but in the first line you wrote Helana instead of Helena.
ReplyDeleteHi Anabel I think this description is very good but you have a mistake, it isn´t danse, is dance.
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