Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Writing: My best friend

My best friend is Alicia. We first met the first day of primary. She don't met anyone and she was scared. She was very different than she is now. 


The first day she wore two pigtails and little purple glasses. She played the saxophone and she was the best plays flute in the class. She always help me to play it. She loved the music, and now too.


First, she had others friends, but some days later we were best friend and we will always. 

1 comment:

  1. I love you redaction! But I think that the last paragraph it shoult at first when explain how you met you and Alice and began to be friends.
    Still I think it's very good!

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