Monday, October 27, 2014

 MY BEST FRIEND

My best friend is German. He´s fourteen years old. We  first met the second day of the high school.
German is a great and beautiful person. Hes´s tall. He´s got long spiky and black hair. He´s got big and brown eyes . He´s always helpping other people. Also, he´s funny and polite.
He sometimes were a blue jeans and a coloured t-shirt .
German has a lot of hobbies which are cycling ,pin-pon and basketball .
All in all, I think that German is a great person and for that is my best friend .
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8 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 27, 2014 at 3:13 AM

    Hi Gonzalo! Great redaction but you have a little fake. In the third line it isn't hes's it is he's

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    1. GonzaloOctober 27, 2014 at 10:46 AM

      Thanks for your comment Maria.But you mean composition instead of "redaction" and mistake instead of "fake".

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  2. UnknownOctober 28, 2014 at 9:27 AM

    Im proud of you Gonzalo, You're improving your english a lot! Try not to repeat always he or he's

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  3. UnknownNovember 2, 2014 at 3:34 AM

    Well done! Gonzalo. I like your writing :). German is a good person and your brother also.

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  4. UnknownNovember 3, 2014 at 11:04 AM

    Hi Gonzalo, this is a very good description and thanks you for this :)

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  5. GonzaloNovember 3, 2014 at 10:27 PM

    Your welcome!!!!

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