Monday, October 27, 2014

Unit 1: Writing "One of my best friends"


MY BEST FRIEND:

            My best friend is Paula. We firts met two years ago at the high school, because we was in the same class. Since that moment we meet some weekend.

             Paula is fourteen years old. She is medium-height. She has got brown and straight hair. She also has got hazel eyes. Paula is brave but she is scare when she see a venenous snake. She is cheerful, too.

             Paula is a very sportif person. She loves playing basketball and she goes trainning two days a week.

              I think Paula is a good person and we always have great fun moments.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Maria I love your composition but....there are some mistakes, for example:
    -You mean: first instead of "firts".
    -we were instead of "we was"
    -weekends instead of "weekend" because you have written "some" before "weekend"
    -she sees instead of " she see" because it is the third person of singular.
    -venemous instead of "venenous"
    -funny moments instead of "fun moments".

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