Monday, October 27, 2014

writting unit 1

         - One of my best friends is Alex. We first met when we started in the highschool. He looked like really serious when I first saw him, but in fact he is really funny and we are always laughing about his jokes.
 - He is taller than me but I'm older than him, he has got brown eyes and dark hair.

         - He loves playing basketball. In the highschool's playground he is always playing with his friends and I think that he is in a basketball's team. He is very skilled with the ball and have a lot of  aim.
       
         - He enjoys watching manga in the computer when he has a bit of free time. He also enjoys hanging out with our friend.
       
         - All in all, I think that Alex is a very good, funny person. And we are always laughing together.

3 comments:

  1. Your writing is fantastic! But I think that you have a mistake in the second paragraph, when you said that alex has a lot of aim. It is third person so you have to put has instead of have.

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  2. you have a mistake, it isn´t "manga", is "anime"

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  3. Good writing! I chose the same person as you :)

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