Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Unit 1 writing: "My best friend"

             My best friend is Inés, we first met about eleven years old at the first day of high school.
   
            She's 14 years old, she's my aged too, she look like very skinny, she's of medium height, and her eyes are very beautiful, they are brown, green, blue, and it haves points red, she's blonde and nice.

            Inés with other persons is very popular and talkative, very energetic and it feels laughs a lot, when she's with me she talks to me very friendly, and she always talks to me about her problems and her loves.

            I think Inés is a beautiful person and everyone have to meet her.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Regina your description is nice , you have described Ines very well , but in third paragraphe , in the secon line when you say she talk you must put " s " sign of the third person .

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  2. Your writing it's perfec !!! I think that Ines and You are very friend and the two are very nice person:) I I think you have a mistake in the last paragraph when you say:she tourn around... because this term is a bit rare.

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  3. Hi Regina! Your description is really good, I love it! I believe that you have succeeded in all you have said about Inés. Certainly, you two will so fine together in this photo. :)

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